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The seventh page of the first chapter of my Pokemon doujinshi, Shine On, Shooting Star!
This is just the draft, so critiques are encouraged. Critique the story, the art, the pacing, the layout of cels, etc. This page isn't meant to be permanent, so what can be changed will.
Pokemon copyright Nintendo, Gamefreak, Creatures, etc.
Shine On, Shooting Star!, Tenko copyright
This is just the draft, so critiques are encouraged. Critique the story, the art, the pacing, the layout of cels, etc. This page isn't meant to be permanent, so what can be changed will.
Pokemon copyright Nintendo, Gamefreak, Creatures, etc.
Shine On, Shooting Star!, Tenko copyright
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© 2007 - 2024 tenko72
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hmm, again, maybe this could use a couple more frames to the sides of her body, like the expressions of her companions, or a distant view of the crash site 
as for her, looking very cute :3 definetly shows the curiosity
as for her, looking very cute :3 definetly shows the curiosity