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The second page of the first chapter of my Pokemon doujinshi, Shine On, Shooting Star!
I do not like this page much. I want to add more to it, like, a part with a freaked out Tenkoko.
This is just the draft, so critiques are encouraged. Critique the story, the art, the pacing, the layout of cels, etc. This page isn't meant to be permanent, so what can be changed will.
Pokemon copyright Nintendo, Gamefreak, Creatures, etc.
Shine On, Shooting Star!, Tenko copyright
I do not like this page much. I want to add more to it, like, a part with a freaked out Tenkoko.
This is just the draft, so critiques are encouraged. Critique the story, the art, the pacing, the layout of cels, etc. This page isn't meant to be permanent, so what can be changed will.
Pokemon copyright Nintendo, Gamefreak, Creatures, etc.
Shine On, Shooting Star!, Tenko copyright
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